It's like you got female Ben Steins to read those lyrics. Needs emotion and projection.
Alright. I loves me some One Punch Man...but...The VA needs some work, I understand that it was a solo first time thing so it gets a pass. As stated in your description, yeah the scene cutaways are pretty rough. AMAZING animation though. Fits the manga well...I did notice that you G rated it quite a bit from the source material however. He cusses at that end scene also the gore of the explosion was tamed. Regardless...I'm votin this in my top 10.
Very great animation and character design. Simple and quite funny. I really enjoyed.
The animation and art style are great, but it had no interesting plot/joke. It moved slowly, to a nothing end. I think ya got potential, especially with the art style.
It's okay...it kinda falls apart towards the end, this could've been worked into a series.
As a person who suffers from psychosis and mild anxiety issues, I can state that the only thing that bothered me about this are the bad dialogues and the TERRIBLE Lavender Town dubstep. It was also a little dated, unless people are still making Lavender Town creepypastas. Do better next time.
Well, beyond potentially sending someone into a seizure...It's retarded.
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